I wrote "KEEP TRYIN" in english

Posted by danny on 2006/8/16 21:33:25
YO i JUST finished it! dang i feel good bout myself haha..its pretty long..9:15 p.m was wen i typed in the last word..it took me almost two damn hours to write this..and yea i wrote it by myself, with no help..so yea comment me back..i need feedbacks!




(TALKING: It's a big world out there yall
Not everything seem to turn out how the way we want them to be
But hey all of us are given a chance
So open up your eyes and live life the fullest)
I don't care about anything
Making this "I don't give a damn" looking
When things don't even seem provoking
But there's something I always want that I can't have
That's why I keep telling myself to keep tryin'
I wanna know
Why so many things bug me
I feel so low, my emotions don't show
I haven't been in a good mood lately
All I wanted was for myself to be faithfully
Everything I had was all torn apart into pieces
If only I hadn't become so useless
Does it really matter?
I don't care about anything
Even if they were to tell me the truth
It still wouldn't be any use
What if one day you woke up and have the love of your life
Sleeping next to your right
But I keep saying keep tryin'
I just realized, the world keeps getting bigger
With every step I take, I've become smaller
I may be a lil bit afraid of the real world
But there won't be anything to stand in my way
If I pray will there be a slight chance of any luck
Everything that I do already looks (censored)ed up
Am I ready? Let's go
I don't care about anything
Even though having this serious look
I should be a bit more by hook
I have always thought that life was unfair
But it turns out to be how the way you live it
That "I don't care" I always say
Really turns out to be "I regret"
The things I want I can't forget
Love or money? I'd rather be rich
Cuz love isn't everything so I won't hold onto my hopes
I don't care about anything
Making this "I don't give a damn" looking
When things don't even seem provoking
But there's that something I always want that I can't have
That's why I keep telling myself to keep tryin'
I guess life isn't that bad after all
Even if I fall, I'd still be able to get back up
Don't be living only to make someone happy
Because you only have one life to enjoy it
No matter what the world brings
Forever isn't gonna always be forever
The things we want that we can't have
If we all do it now, we all can make it
Father keep trying keep trying
Mother keep trying
Brother, sister, my homies, keeps trying trying
No matter what the world brings
Forever isn't gonna always be forever
The things we want that we can't have
If we all do it now, we all can make it
Father keep trying keep trying
Mother keep trying
Brother, sister, my homies, keeps trying trying

Re: I wrote "KEEP TRYIN" in english

Posted by LadyFaye on 2006/8/17 11:27:17
Wow, you did a really good job with that danny! well worth the time, I guess

Re: I wrote "KEEP TRYIN" in english

Posted by gato2000 on 2006/8/17 19:07:33
its really good wow 2 hours alot but good job it was worth it

Re: I wrote "KEEP TRYIN" in english

Posted by Lily on 2006/8/23 22:21:31
Wow, nice job danny. Thanks for translating it and thanks for sharing it with the rest of us.

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