Help Writing A Song!

Posted by animato989 on 2011/6/2 19:30:58
Hello! i need help writing a song! and im a huge fan of Hikki, as well as lady gaga! and i have an instrumental made, and i need help writing a melody and lyrics! The title of the song is called "it'll be alright" message me if u would like to help!

Skype:
gagawhore

yahoo:
Travisger11@yahoo.com

http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100002372467576

heres a link to the song
http://soundcloud.com/user3307096/itll-be-alright

:) thanks!

Re: Help Writing A Song!

Posted by JimJam on 2011/6/3 10:51:39
Hey, I did what I could, tell me what you think! I kept it as "It'll Be Alright". Enjoy!

LINK:
It'll Be Alright

LYRICS:
Oh, I see your face
Perfection never looked so good
Glinting at me in darkness of the room

I want you now
But my reactions are unsure
With just one smile
I'll know if we're meant to be

Oh, just stay with me
Perfection never tasted so sweet
Rumbling inside
Feelings I can't release

Just stay the night
It'll be alright
Just stay the night
It'll be alright

Riper than fruit
You look so good
Just take one bite
And I'm hooked for life

Oh, just stay with me
Perfection never tasted so sweet
Rumbling inside
Feelings I can't release

Just stay the night
It'll be alright
Just stay the night
It'll be alright

The night's wearing on
But you still taste so damn good
I want you here
By my side all night
Just tell me it'll be alright
Alright, it'll be al-

Oh, just stay with me
Perfection never tasted so sweet
Rumbling inside
Feelings I can't release

Just stay the night
It'll be alright
Just stay the night
It'll be alright

Just stay with me
Perfection never tasted so sweet
Rumbling inside
Feelings I can't release

Just stay the night
It'll be alright
Just stay the night
It'll be alright

Re: Help Writing A Song!

Posted by animato989 on 2011/6/4 21:16:29
i really like the lyrics. can u record a demo for it? like sing it and everything? if u wanted to.

Re: Help Writing A Song!

Posted by JimJam on 2011/6/5 4:19:24
If you look in my previous post, I posted a link to the demo I did. :)

Re: Help Writing A Song!

Posted by animato989 on 2011/6/6 16:55:41
i actually really really like it! can u send me just the main vocal track? :)

Re: Help Writing A Song!

Posted by JimJam on 2011/6/7 6:09:19
Sure, I sent it to the email address you posted in your first post.

Re: Help Writing A Song!

Posted by animato989 on 2011/6/7 16:11:13
here is it! :) i added stuff to the instrumental
http://soundcloud.com/gagawhore/itll-be-alright-demo

Re: Help Writing A Song!

Posted by JimJam on 2011/6/7 18:31:33
Wow, I love the almost robotic sound to the song, and the echoing effects on the lyrics and the new instrumental is great! Good job! :)

Re: Help Writing A Song!

Posted by animato989 on 2011/6/7 18:43:40
thanks! :) is it possible that u can do like another take of the vocals? :)

Re: Help Writing A Song!

Posted by JimJam on 2011/6/7 18:58:43
Sure, I will do, but it'll be later on today (it's 3:00am here now, eep!). I'll post them here once I've done them :)
Is there any specific parts you want me to do?

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