y nvr ask me den put my name???

Silence
I can't believe I listened
When everything was so far
I can only breathe, and listen
While you come from so far

I held inside me
The memories of my love
You came inside me
And rearranged everything I ever loved...

I tried to listen when I cried
But with you inside I couldn't try (And I...)
Am holding back, screaming at you
I've lost my hope, and have lost you.

Listen, listen, and hope to love
My heart of stone has turned to dust
Listen, listen, koi wo shite
And hold my breath, love gone away...

I wanted to scream at you a thousand times
I wanted to yell my insecurities
I wanted you to feel my pain
But I held my silence.

I tried screaming at you just once
And I lost it, and you lost
I knew you'd never feel my pain
So I lost my silence.

The silent pain.

bcause i find it dat ur judgin is gd



Judges:
1. Vicky
2. laijunjie14(JJ)


Contestant:
1.Erith
2.danny
3.KoiWoShite

LOL!

oh btw, is silence a hikki song?

Nope, it's not. x: If it is, then I didn't know it. o:

this poem of mine is in the semi-finals http://poetry.com

YOU

The first time I saw u
I knew u were the one
When u pass by
It makes me wanna say hi
The sparkles from ur eyes
Shines like the stars at night
It was love at first sight
It's all about u
Still u don't have a clue
I Just want to hold ur hand
I wish u could try to understand
That I wanna be ur man
Another day has past
If ur with me, I know we will have a blast
Ur love for me is all I need
Somehow, someday u will see
Belive me, I'll be the only one for u
It's all about u
Still u don't have a clue
I just want to to make u mine
I'm trying to show u a sign
All I wanna be is ur man
With this kind of feeling
Girl, u no I can't lie
No matter how many times I try
I still can't have u
And as long as I am living
Girl, it's gonna be all about u

sry danny..
onli 1 post is allow..
so i can onli take ur first post...
n jj..
it does not hv 2 b hikki song..
as long as it is a lyrics will do

Can you proceed with judging after 3 entries..... It doesn't look like a whole lot of people are interested, and this way there's a 1, 2, and 3 place where no one is left out...

i will c how in a wk time

iono if i post this one up already or not..but i wonder how did i do on this one..yea its from FLAVOR OF LIFE..but i wrote the english version





FLAVOR OF LIFE

Why is it that in love, it seems to leave me all the time
All along I thought you were mine
I don't want to say goodbye to you yet I still won't regret
I guess this is how it is "the flavor of love"
Everything seems to be going so smoothly
Seeing you everyday was easy
I've always thought that you wouldn't leave me
Now you wanna let go, all that we had
I can't stand seeing you without feeling heartbroken
You walked pass by me without a word spoken
Why is it that in love, it seems to leave me all the time
All along I thought you were mine
I don't want to say goodbye to you yet I still won't regret
I guess this is how it is "the flavor of love"
After all of this, I don't even know where to start
How could you leave me like this with the cold heart
I thought we would never be this far apart
But we couldn't be
When I awake I thought you'd be by my side
Now I think I'll have to let everything slide
Just when I begin to forget you
It's your face I see, It hurts me to see you free
I don't wanna say goodbye to you yet I still won't regret
I guess this is how it is I believe this love was real
One wish would make this love's wound heal
Take away the pain so I can't feel it
The short bliss we had is gone, it's all done
I still wanna let you know how much I love you
The flavor of love
I still can't understand all that we had could come to an end
Was it destiny that set the two of us free
Every night I would pray that you would come back to me
If there's chance I would take it and go back
More than anything that I want, I want you by my side
I can't stand feeling this way, seeing you walk away
Breaks my heart, I don't want us apart
Can't we go back from the start
Why is it that in love, it seems to leave me all the time
All along I thought you were mine
I don't want to say goodbye to you yet I still won't regret
I guess this is how it is
"The flavor of love"