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Re: Lyrics Writting Contest!!!!!!!!
Addicted to Hikki
Joined: 2007/1/29
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Posts: 58
You know what? I'M gonna join this, just to be a smart alec to the person who wanted there to be 1, 2, and 3 places.

I shall post the song later.
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Posted on: 2007/3/26 11:34
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  •  larxene-rinoa
      larxene-rinoa
Re: Lyrics Writting Contest!!!!!!!!
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Joined: 2006/11/16
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Posts: 184
i'll join then!

HIKARI

no matter when, where,i'm never alone
intention kept,push my way towards you
light emitted from you,brightened my hope, my life

in the dark alley, i stand, afraid
then you, my light, appeared,the darkness dispersed

the promise i made lately, with a vow i'll keep it
it will not be long before our dreams come true
when it does, i will not cry

no matter when, where
we'll always be near
no matter how far the distance
we'll always be together
mirage of light, finds me in the midst of darkness
holding me tightly

back in the alley, alone
i prayed for you to come

you didn't fail me, i was right to trust
with you beside me eternally, the future doesn't seem so bleak

no matter when, where
we'll always be near
no matter how far the distance
we'll always be together
shimmer of light, finds me in the midst of darkness
holding me tightly

lets go
together to a new future ahead
a secret kept, look at me
this song shall be our hope and light
nothing will be the same

thinking far a long tme ago
this passion between us, feels so new
i'll embrace it with both hands

lets go
together to a new future ahead
a secret kept, look at me
this song shall be our hope and light
nothing will be the same

lets go
together to a new future ahead
a secret kept, look at me
this song shall be our hope and light
nothing will be the same
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Posted on: 2007/3/26 18:20
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Re: Lyrics Writting Contest!!!!!!!!
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Joined: 2007/1/29
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Posts: 58
All righty, here's my entry. It might not be the best in the world, granted, but I tried to make it match the tune.

Yeah, it was kind of taken from an English translation, but I tried to make it fit the best I could. Sorry to those who don't think that's fair, but it was tough deciding on how to word some things...

HAYATOCHI (Remix)

Now that I come out of my room I can plainly see
When it doesn?t go away, it?s obviously the truth
Should I try ignoring it, as if it?s no big thing?
Like when someone sees you trip up?

You?re not that fair and I wonder if you know
That it isn?t flattery on my part
I miss you now
Or am I just jumping to conclusions?

Will you like me just for my ideas and not my true person?
And if I ever feel like lying to you, will you just hate me?

With you I just felt like I couldn?t win
?You always seem so strong because you never cry?
You need to stop jumping to conclusions every day

When I finally opened my eyes to the utter truth
I realized that the words of an idealist were annoying

Just don?t blame me
You can?t say that I ran slower than usual
However at this time
It just seems like our paces didn?t match

Waking up from a surreal dream, I want to close my eyes again
But a realist like yourself wouldn?t really understand
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Posted on: 2007/3/27 19:32
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  •  Naruto_Uzumaki
      Naruto_Uzumaki
Re: Lyrics Writting Contest!!!!!!!!
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Joined: 2007/3/27
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I want to enter to so my name is O'Brian and give me two or three days to make some lyrics.
Posted on: 2007/3/27 19:55
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Re: Lyrics Writting Contest!!!!!!!!
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Joined: 2006/2/23
A/S/L 17/M/Cali
Posts: 520
sorry but..i think my HATOCHI-REMIX is better hahahaha


JUMPING TO CONCLUSIONS

Round, round, and around
Here we go tumbling
We'll get it right this time
It's wordless when you say this to me
Do you think I believe what you say
It's not long before I let you know
That I won't be waiting for this to work
With you or not, it doesn't matter
Try to talk this out, will just make things shatter
Being alone, nothing will bother
It's time we part ways, oh yea yea
Look where that move you made led us to
We're jumping to conclusions
The lies you said to make things true
This all ends with confusions
No more heartaches, I don't wanna hear your story
You're the mistakes, I shouldn't feel sorry
No more tears to waste, I don't have to worry
No more pain to taste ~whoa whoa~
All that we had are being thrown away
We're jumping to conclusions
I have said the things I need to say
I've made my decisions
Even though it's over, our relationship
It still left a piece in my heart (heart)
I wish that we didn't have to part
And you didn't have to leave a mark
On me, but now-
You said my love don't mean a thing
How much I love you
That's cause you don't know
How much I love you
Look where that move you made led us to
We're jumping to conclusions
The lies you said to make things true
This all ends with confusions
Posted on: 2007/3/27 22:10
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Re: Lyrics Writting Contest!!!!!!!!
Addicted to Hikki
Joined: 2007/1/29
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Posts: 58
Wow, yeah, no. Way to be competitive and the epitome of mature, danny.
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Posted on: 2007/3/28 4:34
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  •  larxene-rinoa
      larxene-rinoa
Re: Lyrics Writting Contest!!!!!!!!
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Joined: 2006/11/16
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so when will the judging take place?
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Posted on: 2007/3/28 7:14
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  •  larxene-rinoa
      larxene-rinoa
Re: Lyrics Writting Contest!!!!!!!!
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Joined: 2006/11/16
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er... is this thread dead or smth?
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Posted on: 2007/4/2 5:33
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Re: Lyrics Writting Contest!!!!!!!!
Insane Hikki Fan
Joined: 2006/10/9
A/S/L 17/F/Singapore
Posts: 2267
half dead..
let mi settle my tis wk test first
Posted on: 2007/4/2 6:27
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  •  laijunjie14
      laijunjie14
Re: Lyrics Writting Contest!!!!!!!!
Show Off!
Joined: 2006/11/17
A/S/L 24/M/Singapore
Posts: 6223
lyrics writing..... not my cup of tea...
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Posted on: 2007/4/4 1:10
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