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  •  Kiynteyh
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The Guardian Chronicles
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i've started writing my own story and decided to steal soralistic's idea and stayed up all night to create a site dedicated to The Guardian Chronicles... i'll be posting my story there as i write it.. i'd really love for you guys to check it out if u get the time... comments and constructive critisism would be appriciated d(^-^)b

theguardianchronicles.webs.com

Edit:www.freewebs.com/theguardianchronicles is another link to the site that seems to work better cuz i've been having trouble getting the other link to load... not sure if its just me but just incase...
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Posted on: 2008/9/7 5:43
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  •  Roscoe
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Re: The Guardian Chronicles
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Not too shabby!
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Posted on: 2008/9/7 5:56
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  •  Kiynteyh
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Re: The Guardian Chronicles
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domo arigato
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Knocked to the ground by the subtle thunder,
Shackled and bound by the sound of your voice,
Wandering around in silent wonder."
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Posted on: 2008/9/7 6:20
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  •  neXus
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Re: The Guardian Chronicles
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Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Posted on: 2008/9/7 16:46
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  •  Kiynteyh
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Re: The Guardian Chronicles
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that reminds me... i never got to revise the story after i typed it up... i fell asleep i'll get right on that

also i'll be adding more to the first chapter shortly
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"Taken in by the delicate noise,
Knocked to the ground by the subtle thunder,
Shackled and bound by the sound of your voice,
Wandering around in silent wonder."
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Posted on: 2008/9/8 17:37
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  •  SwallowTail
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Re: The Guardian Chronicles
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I read it.. hmm will the main char have accompany in her journey. I hope there is a big epic pict, when she on a huge battle againts the tyrany. That will be cool ^o^.
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Posted on: 2008/9/8 19:33
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  •  Kiynteyh
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Re: The Guardian Chronicles
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at first the story kinda reflects on Kye's personal problems and how the 2 boys (which are Calvin and Devin if u didnt figure it out from the prologe) help her along with her friend Lindsey learn to accept things for what they are but also teach them that they can take destiny into their own hands.... later in the story, things get switched up abit when Cal and Dev reveal everything to Kye about the whole Guardian of Destiny thing and that they arent from her dimension and need her help to defeat this dark lord thats overtaking their realm.... so what appears to be a normal story at first takes a really drastic change and what not.. the ending is a bit of a shocker too.. atleast its gonna be
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"Taken in by the delicate noise,
Knocked to the ground by the subtle thunder,
Shackled and bound by the sound of your voice,
Wandering around in silent wonder."
- Anonymous
Posted on: 2008/9/9 16:35
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  •  SwallowTail
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Re: The Guardian Chronicles
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Quote:

Kiynteyh wrote:
at first the story kinda reflects on Kye's personal problems and how the 2 boys (which are Calvin and Devin if u didnt figure it out from the prologe) help her along with her friend Lindsey learn to accept things for what they are but also teach them that they can take destiny into their own hands.... later in the story, things get switched up abit when Cal and Dev reveal everything to Kye about the whole Guardian of Destiny thing and that they arent from her dimension and need her help to defeat this dark lord thats overtaking their realm.... so what appears to be a normal story at first takes a really drastic change and what not.. the ending is a bit of a shocker too.. atleast its gonna be


waaaaaa u spoil the ending T-T, that's no cool when u said the ending will be shock. Coz on my mind lot of negative ending right now and it will be pipipipipipipipipipipipipipipipi nahhh I wont tell it. ^o^
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Posted on: 2008/9/10 1:08
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  •  Kiynteyh
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Re: The Guardian Chronicles
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lol im sry XD but just because its a shocker doesnt mean its gonna be a bad ending
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Shackled and bound by the sound of your voice,
Wandering around in silent wonder."
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Posted on: 2008/9/12 17:26
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  •  SwallowTail
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Re: The Guardian Chronicles
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I see well I'm glad 2 hear it, actually I like fiction story... u know, I can imagine if the story become an anime like that ^o^. My imagination fly over the universe.
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Posted on: 2008/9/12 20:15
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