Utada Net.com Forum Index
   About You
  Poetry anyone??

 

 Bottom   Previous Topic   Next Topic
<1234567...9>
  •  Topic options
Poster Thread
  •  SwallowTail
      SwallowTail
Re: Poetry anyone??
Moderator
Joined: 2008/6/13
A/S/L ∞ / M / Indonesia
Posts: 3286
I think you should do that, maybe a blog with all of your poem in that place maybe some day u will released book of poems
_________________
Posted on: 2008/11/15 20:22
Top
  •  eni-san
      eni-san
Re: Poetry anyone??
Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/9/11
A/S/L it's a secret
Posts: 152
this probably counts for nothing...but i used to write on poemhunter.com (i only have old poems on there though)...and i do publish poetry in my notes on facebook...baby steps, people, baby steps...

yeah, i might look into publishing some day. thanks for the vote of confidence.
_________________
Posted on: 2008/11/15 20:36
Top
  •  eni-san
      eni-san
Re: Poetry anyone??
Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/9/11
A/S/L it's a secret
Posts: 152
this is not one of my poems...it's from a song i'm listening to that's amazing. it's called "cosmic journey" by solange knowles.

Won't you move closer than close
can bring you to me
Let your skin be the only warmth I feel
Can we lay in this space until forever?
Till the moments around us all are still
And tell me where do we go?
On this winding, traveling open road

To the hills where the love people go
Far in the night, you and I, don't look back, you will find me

Cosmic Journey
And I love you I swear
Cosmic Journey(and I love you I swear)
And I love you I swear

Won't you go deeper than deep can dig into me
Make the words roll over your tongue to mine
As I probably kiss you better than I'll tell you
And the way that you touch feels so sublime
and let my body

Be all mine
And discover you in ways you will find
to the hills where the love people go
Far into the night, you and I, don't look back and you'll find me

Cosmic Journey
And I love you I swear
Cosmic Journey
And I love you I swear

and the song goes on from there...
_________________
Posted on: 2008/11/15 20:41
Top
  •  SwallowTail
      SwallowTail
Re: Poetry anyone??
Moderator
Joined: 2008/6/13
A/S/L ∞ / M / Indonesia
Posts: 3286
link me to your facebook I wanna read your work.

Solange knowles uhmmm any relation with B knowles
_________________
Posted on: 2008/11/15 20:44
Top
  •  eni-san
      eni-san
Re: Poetry anyone??
Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/9/11
A/S/L it's a secret
Posts: 152
ok, can you send me a PM with your name and stuff and i'll just add you?

yeah, solange is beyonce's younger sister. i think she's better than beyonce. just because her style, her lyrics...everything...is so different compared to other artists.
_________________
Posted on: 2008/11/15 21:09
Top
  •  SwallowTail
      SwallowTail
Re: Poetry anyone??
Moderator
Joined: 2008/6/13
A/S/L ∞ / M / Indonesia
Posts: 3286
Oh I got to made face book eh I don't have one. Okay will send pm after I made facebook

Oh I see, I don't know that. Do you have the link of her pv or something to see what the diff between she and B Knowles
_________________
Posted on: 2008/11/15 21:23
Top
  •  eni-san
      eni-san
Re: Poetry anyone??
Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/9/11
A/S/L it's a secret
Posts: 152
hahaha...ok. yeah, just don't get addicted to facebook...because that does happen...

i can try to find links to a few music videos.

this is Solange:
http://www.imeem.com/solange/video/zl0hS1vr/solange_sandcastle_disco_music_video/

and this is Beyonce:
http://www.imeem.com/beyonce/video/D7ZvJ_wx/beyonce_single_ladies_music_video/

enjoy
_________________
Posted on: 2008/11/15 21:45
Top
  •  eni-san
      eni-san
Re: Poetry anyone??
Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/9/11
A/S/L it's a secret
Posts: 152
but anyway...to get things back on topic...here's a song i wrote a few months ago

AFTERMATH

I want to be
A number again
So I can pretend
That I don?t exist
Retreat into
My internal world
Alone in the biggest crowd

When I emerged
Took leave of my mind
I started to love
The music outside
I was crazy for
Believing in yes
When the loudest notes were no.

And now I roam like a ghost in a graveyard
Never aware of anything else
Always seeming to see you there
Even when I close my eyes.

The finality
Of only an hour
Haunts my head
The entire night
Tossing and turning
wishing to reverse
the day that I held your hand.

And now I roam like a ghost in a graveyard
Never aware of anything else
Always seeming to see you there
Even when I close my eyes.

I find it hard
To go my own way
Forgetting your face
When impersonal fate
Decides to be cruel
And lead me back to you

Darling I miss
The way that it seemed
Like it was so right
Until the light
Of truth began
To show me the wrong

And now I roam like a ghost in a graveyard
Never aware of anything else
Always seeming to see you there
Even when I close my eyes.

And now I roam like a ghost in a graveyard
Never aware of anything else
Wishing I could just go to sleep
and wake up to another day.
_________________
Posted on: 2008/11/15 21:50
Top
  •  SwallowTail
      SwallowTail
Re: Poetry anyone??
Moderator
Joined: 2008/6/13
A/S/L ∞ / M / Indonesia
Posts: 3286
The lyrics cool, hip hop music style or ? if its that's great
_________________
Posted on: 2008/11/15 22:06
Top
  •  eni-san
      eni-san
Re: Poetry anyone??
Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/9/11
A/S/L it's a secret
Posts: 152
i don't know if my song really has a distinct style...i don't really stick to a specific style when i write songs...*shrugs*
glad you like it.
_________________
Posted on: 2008/11/15 22:17
Top
 Top   Previous Topic   Next Topic
<1234567...9>