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random thought: if you really want some poetic, meaningful music, listen to FLOETRY. they're awesome.
 and also, of course, UTADA has poetic, meaningful music too. No question.  |
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Posted on: 2008/12/8 7:21
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FLOETRY ?
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Posted on: 2008/12/9 5:11
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yeah. not many people even know about them in the U.S. i don't think. go to imeem.com, type in Floetry, and see what you can find...
and here's a poem by yours truly...wrote this sometime over the summer. AUTOBIOGRAPHY they used to laugh at her lisp, but now she's talking pretty. after suffering a few stings by beloved queen bees and wondering why her own people pointed and laughed...she said "one day i'll fight these battles." for now, she's sitting behind her books, report card sunny-side-up on her desk. but she said she'd get there sometime. and sometime came. because she found fight in her fingers one day, saw red and showed them all just how bright and bloody it was... but it still didn't feel right. so she let herself be buried under the rubble of harsh words, the sticks and the stones, voice choked in by cries. one night, bleary-eyed, those fingers poked out from those ashes and grasped the power of a pen. she pulled herself out-- never mind the damage done-- and began to find peace in poetry. no stuttering this time, they're hearing it ring carillon-clear: every line in place, the anger erased, imperfections replaced, she's starting to taste victory now, now that pressure's met praise. fingers have stopped pointing; instead hands are clapping-- does it sound like she's still lisping? |
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Posted on: 2008/12/9 6:13
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An encouraging poem, Eni-san. I'm glad that you have found some pride in what you are now. Thanks for your compliment about my previous work - the topic was close to my heart at the time of its writing but a few shy days ago.
I'll try to post something up tomorrow. |
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Posted on: 2008/12/10 21:58
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I'll contribute darker poems....
here's an episode with one of my wisdom tooth Night Scare Reality reels me from my infinite universe I crawl ashore, limbs slump, cradling in Earth upon her nape Night stands over my bed, in his shadow I am immersed His nature to hide in darkness sins, guilt and crimes of hate A pale eye leers at me accusing of a deed perverse I welcome the dark light, into my conscience it does seep But my heart rejects it, the shame it holds not that adverse The smog creeps back to the void, it covets doesn?t reap He joins a romp with dogs astray; they bark and scratch at what?s not there He stalks corners in alleys stained of oil, gore I dare not say Rubbing sweat between my knees, sticky warm my loins I?m aware It?s heavy what?s swimming by my gums I need it thrown away Imagination betrays me; it changes sides with Night Mirror faces, creaking doors, open closets and what more? I?m paralyzed by a coffin nail, but it?s only fear, I fight My mouth splatters blood on the sink; the teeth are ever so sore Enamels reddened, I bare them at my reflection A repulsive sight it scares, I wonder almost ?Is it real?? I laugh ?who cares?! and rinse and spit with clean solution Because for children of the night, there is no image to see |
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Posted on: 2008/12/11 9:41
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i remember wisdom teeth...
 And now for a darker poem of my own... DIDO they weigh me down: stones of a funeral pyre cut to bear a sacrifice. the air stagnant, still as my eyes staring straight ahead into sweet oblivion, saccharine slaughter. a smile played at my lips even when i knew the nature of these stones-- not a monument to a deathless love but an altar for a hapless wretch blinded by possibility, dazzled by supposed fortune. as gentle hands bind me to the truth and bear me to the peak of shameful deception, a horrific epiphany strikes my soul: to believe that i once wished to kiss lying lips is a burden borne beyond the grave. |
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Posted on: 2008/12/12 8:08
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awesome poem..  |
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Posted on: 2008/12/13 5:10
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Hikki Obsessed
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Thanks, I had a surge of inspiration the morning after it happened.
I wrote this one when I was really sick Dying Alive His heart beats for a cadaver The blood runs in vain Waiting to gush from his wrists He lost himself in oblivion Forgetting love and hate He only knows despair His soul will soon empty and form a vacuum that will siphon what's left of his sanity |
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Posted on: 2008/12/13 6:50
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i love your poems. your mind is far from idle... DARKEST HOUR a part of me still wonders about what could have been. i think of your smile shining through shades of gray, your laughter vivid and bright. in your eyes, i see the calm and cloudless sky of a day that may never dawn. |
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Hikki Obsessed
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wow nice poetry
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Posted on: 2009/1/6 13:04
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