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  •  Kiynteyh
      Kiynteyh
Re: New site. New title. Same story... TCG goes XofFate
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SwallowTail wrote:
After I read chapter 4 uhmmm a bit different with the last Guardian Chronicle you made before. Something bother me you aid its a nornal high school and only some people have the special ability kyelan and her friends .

My question why they scanning the school, some thing wrong , some bad thing happen before and this is the pre-caution act or there will be some explanation with their activity ? sry being to curious


Yeah, it's alot different. >.<

Conlan and Devlin are scanning the school because they're looking for someone/something..
That's all I'll say on that though, you'll just have to keep reading. It'll be explained later on. ;D


Speaking of keep reading, I added a good amount to chapter 4, thus finishing the "prologue" part of the story.

I also noticed that I've been neglecting the character profiles. D:
I should get to writing those. >.<
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Posted on: 2009/9/25 16:43
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  •  SwallowTail
      SwallowTail
Re: New site. New title. Same story... TCG goes XofFate
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Yosha Kyn, Ganbatte Kudassai keep on the good work
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Posted on: 2009/9/27 22:25
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  •  Kiynteyh
      Kiynteyh
Re: New site. New title. Same story... TCG goes XofFate
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Hehe, I'll try! ,(^-^)>
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Posted on: 2009/9/28 13:55
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  •  Kiynteyh
      Kiynteyh
Re: New site. New title. Same story... TCG goes XofFate
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Hey, I took an unGodly long break from XofFate since my life kind of went to hell the last several months, but a friend of mine has talked me into writing again, so http://xoffate.ucoz.com is up and running again, and chapters 5 and 6 have been posted. So for those of you still interested, enjoy!

And feedback/constructive criticism is still greatly appreciated. :D

Oh, oh! Annnnd for those of you who have facebook, search for Exigency of Fate and become a fan! :)
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"Taken in by the delicate noise,
Knocked to the ground by the subtle thunder,
Shackled and bound by the sound of your voice,
Wandering around in silent wonder."
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Posted on: 2010/5/15 21:48
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  •  GIGAcorrupt
      GIGAcorrupt
Re: New site. New title. Same story... TCG goes XofFate
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Kiynteyh wrote:
Hey, I took an unGodly long break from XofFate since my life kind of went to hell the last several months, but a friend of mine has talked me into writing again, so http://xoffate.ucoz.com is up and running again, and chapters 5 and 6 have been posted. So for those of you still interested, enjoy!

And feedback/constructive criticism is still greatly appreciated. :D

Oh, oh! Annnnd for those of you who have facebook, search for Exigency of Fate and become a fan! :)


Warrior Lady!!! Where on earth have you been??!!! D:
Posted on: 2010/5/16 0:50
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  •  Kiynteyh
      Kiynteyh
Re: New site. New title. Same story... TCG goes XofFate
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Well, originally I gave up on the story and almost forgot about it. But my (ex)best friend moved in with me shortly after I quit writing and lived with me for over 7 months (just recently got kicked out almost a month ago now) and that was Godawful. Plus a lot of other crap just went all to hell in my personal life and what not. It's a miracle I'm still here haha. My stress level is so high still thanks to that @$%$* that it's a wonder I haven't had a heart attack. >.>"
But aaaaaanyway, that's a whole different story for a whole different time.

The main thing is I am back and I brought XofFate back with meh! ^^
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Posted on: 2010/5/16 7:05
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  •  SwallowTail
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Re: New site. New title. Same story... TCG goes XofFate
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quote from Valkyrie Profile "Its been a long time Lenneth" . Where have you've been :D

Anyway.... I'm joining the group, i'll read the new chapter then

Conlan eyes were red, he must be a vampire XD.

Did Conlan knew Kye have supernatural ability for the first time they've met ? That's why he were trying to get closer to Kye ?

Where's Devlin...... didn't found him on the chapter maybe next chapter

Keep it up Girl
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Posted on: 2010/5/16 20:03
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  •  Kiynteyh
      Kiynteyh
Re: New site. New title. Same story... TCG goes XofFate
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Haha, I've been.. somewhere, lol. But I'm back now though, and that's what matters. ^^

I saw. Makes meh happy in the face. :D

He knows something is different about her, but he doesn't know what yet.

Devlin is being stalked by Lindsey, lol.
It was just never mentioned in this chapter. cx
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Shackled and bound by the sound of your voice,
Wandering around in silent wonder."
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Posted on: 2010/5/20 6:49
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  •  Kiynteyh
      Kiynteyh
Re: New site. New title. Same story... TCG goes XofFate
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Chapter 7 is up on the site for those of you that are interested.

:D
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Knocked to the ground by the subtle thunder,
Shackled and bound by the sound of your voice,
Wandering around in silent wonder."
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Posted on: 2010/5/27 10:42
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  •  SwallowTail
      SwallowTail
Re: New site. New title. Same story... TCG goes XofFate
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Kristell notice something different with Devlin and Conlan and my guess was right they were a vampires ( maybe that's was Kristell who say it )

So Rayne , Kristell and Kyelan having un-natural ability ?
Rayne and Kristell who are they ?
Whose will come through the door ?
Is it Devlin and Conlan ?
Will they trying to attack those girls or not ?

Chapter 8 please
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Posted on: 2010/5/29 2:26
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