and did u make this instrumental?

I would love to collaborate with you, and make some dance music! You can hear my music here: http://www.myspace.com/connersmedley

tell me what u think! :)

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Haha, no, that's the official instrumental - I never made it

yea, i had heard some of ur stuff before, i like it! do u wannna record vocals on a track of mine? this is a song of mine that was made for someone else but stuff came up and i took it back, so here it is

CLICK HERE FOR MY SONG!

I like the song, but I'm finding it hard to come up with lyrics with this piece.. I will work on it and get back to you in a few days.

coo;l cool kk :)

I liked the song, so quickly came up with some lyrics. I know this wasn't directed at me, but I instantly came up with lyrics for the tune, so tell me what you think >.>

I did a quick recording, so you know how it goes.
I called it "Say You'll Be Mine", FYI.

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Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine

Midnight fast approaching
Lights dimmed down low
Looking in the crowd
On a role
Forcing my way through I look into your eyes
Oh, baby, you've got my hypnotised

Furthermore I'd like to say I'll take a chance
On a fast paced no-strings-attached
Whirlwind romance

Time is of the essence
And I wanna see
If I'm the one for you
And you're the one for me

Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Can't you see that I want you right now
Forget about the others it's just you and me now

Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine

Music pumping 'round
Gathering pace
You move and shake it
In my face
You see I'm desperate
For your lovin'
But you won't get your way
With your pushin' and shovin'

Tonight's the night
I can see it clearly
You'll get your way
If you're doing it fairly
The lights shine on
It's just you and me now
I see the others looking from the crowd

Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Can't you see that I want you right now
Forget about the others it's just you and me now

Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine
Forget about the others it's just you and me now

Say you'll be mine
Say you'll be mine

Anyway, tell me what you think, and feel free to use any part of it, too :D

i really like it! it was exciting seeing something i made being sang to, but ummm can u send me the acapella?

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Glad you like it. And I have the acapella still, so I'll send it to your email address, if that's okay?
I know it's not great, I did it in one take and quickly, just as a demonstration kinda thing.