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Hikki Fanatic
 
Joined: 2008/11/19
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Hello! i need help writing a song! and im a huge fan of Hikki, as well as lady gaga! and i have an instrumental made, and i need help writing a melody and lyrics! The title of the song is called "it'll be alright" message me if u would like to help!
Skype: gagawhore yahoo: Travisger11@yahoo.com http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100002372467576 heres a link to the song http://soundcloud.com/user3307096/itll-be-alright :) thanks! |
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Posted on: 2011/6/2 19:30
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Hikki Obsessed
 
Joined: 2009/7/28
A/S/L 25 / M / UK
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Hey, I did what I could, tell me what you think! I kept it as "It'll Be Alright". Enjoy!
LINK: It'll Be Alright LYRICS: Oh, I see your face Perfection never looked so good Glinting at me in darkness of the room I want you now But my reactions are unsure With just one smile I'll know if we're meant to be Oh, just stay with me Perfection never tasted so sweet Rumbling inside Feelings I can't release Just stay the night It'll be alright Just stay the night It'll be alright Riper than fruit You look so good Just take one bite And I'm hooked for life Oh, just stay with me Perfection never tasted so sweet Rumbling inside Feelings I can't release Just stay the night It'll be alright Just stay the night It'll be alright The night's wearing on But you still taste so damn good I want you here By my side all night Just tell me it'll be alright Alright, it'll be al- Oh, just stay with me Perfection never tasted so sweet Rumbling inside Feelings I can't release Just stay the night It'll be alright Just stay the night It'll be alright Just stay with me Perfection never tasted so sweet Rumbling inside Feelings I can't release Just stay the night It'll be alright Just stay the night It'll be alright |
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Posted on: 2011/6/3 10:51
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Hikki Fanatic
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i really like the lyrics. can u record a demo for it? like sing it and everything? if u wanted to.
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Posted on: 2011/6/4 21:16
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Hikki Obsessed
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If you look in my previous post, I posted a link to the demo I did. :)
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Posted on: 2011/6/5 4:19
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Hikki Fanatic
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i actually really really like it! can u send me just the main vocal track? :)
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Posted on: 2011/6/6 16:55
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Hikki Obsessed
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Sure, I sent it to the email address you posted in your first post.
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Posted on: 2011/6/7 6:09
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Hikki Fanatic
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here is it! :) i added stuff to the instrumental
http://soundcloud.com/gagawhore/itll-be-alright-demo |
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Posted on: 2011/6/7 16:11
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Hikki Obsessed
Joined: 2009/7/28
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Wow, I love the almost robotic sound to the song, and the echoing effects on the lyrics and the new instrumental is great! Good job! :)
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Posted on: 2011/6/7 18:31
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Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/11/19
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thanks! :) is it possible that u can do like another take of the vocals? :)
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Posted on: 2011/6/7 18:43
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Hikki Obsessed
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Sure, I will do, but it'll be later on today (it's 3:00am here now, eep!). I'll post them here once I've done them :)
Is there any specific parts you want me to do? |
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Posted on: 2011/6/7 18:58
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