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Help Writing A Song!
Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/11/19
A/S/L 20/male/USA
Posts: 102
Hello! i need help writing a song! and im a huge fan of Hikki, as well as lady gaga! and i have an instrumental made, and i need help writing a melody and lyrics! The title of the song is called "it'll be alright" message me if u would like to help!

Skype:
gagawhore

yahoo:
Travisger11@yahoo.com

http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100002372467576

heres a link to the song
http://soundcloud.com/user3307096/itll-be-alright

:) thanks!
Posted on: 2011/6/2 19:30
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  •  JimJam
      JimJam
Re: Help Writing A Song!
Hikki Obsessed
Joined: 2009/7/28
A/S/L 25 / M / UK
Posts: 225
Hey, I did what I could, tell me what you think! I kept it as "It'll Be Alright". Enjoy!

LINK:
It'll Be Alright

LYRICS:
Oh, I see your face
Perfection never looked so good
Glinting at me in darkness of the room

I want you now
But my reactions are unsure
With just one smile
I'll know if we're meant to be

Oh, just stay with me
Perfection never tasted so sweet
Rumbling inside
Feelings I can't release

Just stay the night
It'll be alright
Just stay the night
It'll be alright

Riper than fruit
You look so good
Just take one bite
And I'm hooked for life

Oh, just stay with me
Perfection never tasted so sweet
Rumbling inside
Feelings I can't release

Just stay the night
It'll be alright
Just stay the night
It'll be alright

The night's wearing on
But you still taste so damn good
I want you here
By my side all night
Just tell me it'll be alright
Alright, it'll be al-

Oh, just stay with me
Perfection never tasted so sweet
Rumbling inside
Feelings I can't release

Just stay the night
It'll be alright
Just stay the night
It'll be alright

Just stay with me
Perfection never tasted so sweet
Rumbling inside
Feelings I can't release

Just stay the night
It'll be alright
Just stay the night
It'll be alright
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Posted on: 2011/6/3 10:51
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Re: Help Writing A Song!
Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/11/19
A/S/L 20/male/USA
Posts: 102
i really like the lyrics. can u record a demo for it? like sing it and everything? if u wanted to.
Posted on: 2011/6/4 21:16
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  •  JimJam
      JimJam
Re: Help Writing A Song!
Hikki Obsessed
Joined: 2009/7/28
A/S/L 25 / M / UK
Posts: 225
If you look in my previous post, I posted a link to the demo I did. :)
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Posted on: 2011/6/5 4:19
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Re: Help Writing A Song!
Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/11/19
A/S/L 20/male/USA
Posts: 102
i actually really really like it! can u send me just the main vocal track? :)
Posted on: 2011/6/6 16:55
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  •  JimJam
      JimJam
Re: Help Writing A Song!
Hikki Obsessed
Joined: 2009/7/28
A/S/L 25 / M / UK
Posts: 225
Sure, I sent it to the email address you posted in your first post.
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Posted on: 2011/6/7 6:09
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Re: Help Writing A Song!
Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/11/19
A/S/L 20/male/USA
Posts: 102
here is it! :) i added stuff to the instrumental
http://soundcloud.com/gagawhore/itll-be-alright-demo
Posted on: 2011/6/7 16:11
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  •  JimJam
      JimJam
Re: Help Writing A Song!
Hikki Obsessed
Joined: 2009/7/28
A/S/L 25 / M / UK
Posts: 225
Wow, I love the almost robotic sound to the song, and the echoing effects on the lyrics and the new instrumental is great! Good job! :)
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Posted on: 2011/6/7 18:31
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Re: Help Writing A Song!
Hikki Fanatic
Joined: 2008/11/19
A/S/L 20/male/USA
Posts: 102
thanks! :) is it possible that u can do like another take of the vocals? :)
Posted on: 2011/6/7 18:43
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  •  JimJam
      JimJam
Re: Help Writing A Song!
Hikki Obsessed
Joined: 2009/7/28
A/S/L 25 / M / UK
Posts: 225
Sure, I will do, but it'll be later on today (it's 3:00am here now, eep!). I'll post them here once I've done them :)
Is there any specific parts you want me to do?
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Posted on: 2011/6/7 18:58
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