i wrote a poem using BE MY LAST's beat..and i use two lines of translated BE MY LAST "There's nothing in my hands,
Even when you're holding onto them" sing along!
and its called "JUST THIS ONCE"
i wrote this poem for my sister, bcuz she wanted me to write a poem bout her relationship so this sounds kinda feminine i think...



I'm so tired of being here
The fears I have when they're near
Alone at night with these tears
The words from you, I hear
What else, what else can I do
When there's so much pressure on me from you
Nothing seems to be working out
Keeping all the things that I need to know
Just this once, just this once, just this once
Just this once, this won't keep going, just this once
I've been warned about this
That love was the worstest pain
Most of the ache
Is now more likely a strain
To me, now, this love was a mistake
Nothing seems to be working out
I really wanna know how far this will go
With my heart, with my heart, with my heart
With my heart, try not to break it, just this once
There's nothing in my hands
Even when you're holding onto them
Nothing seems to be working out
The things I need to know
Are now being hidden
Just this once, just this once, just this once
Just this once, this won't keep going, just this once

Snowedit: Moved to proper subforum.

.......................ITS BEAUTYFUL!!! I LOVE it!! CLAP!CLAP CLAP CLAP!! PS: U CAN ONE DAY BECOME A PERSON WHO WRITES POEMS!

WOW, your like someone form another forum i know, except she uses more complicated words and there way shorter!! good job btw, it would take me forever to write a poem, even a small one.