awesomeness!!!! cant wait to hear it^^.v

Aww thank you for the comments and critisisms :0). Could you please clarify what you mean in the critisisms? I just wanna be sure I know what you mean

omg dident saw that one comming! damn good work!
too bad the piano mix had no vocals but still fall is a verry cool song! hikaru has an rival! hahaha.
too bad i dont have other songs of you to compair so maybe my comment is misplaced if so please tell
i dont know if it is the meaning but eum maybe it is in the song but try not to change the pinch so often in an song it is happeneing to much and well...thats too bad in my eyes but that doesnt mean it is an masterpiece and another thing...the silince parts in your voice i also dont know if it was the meaning that these two comments of mine maybe they WERE part of the song if so then i dont have any comment ..its good keep up the good work! hope to hear more

Hey all sorry for the late uploads. I promised people that wanted to hear my music (JJ and Kiynteyh I'm looking at you o.o) that I would upload to myspace and post the lyrics here.

Theres only one song with vocals up so far but I do need to rerecord the vocals. I'm giving my throat a weeks rest from singing but it should be back up to scratch on tuesday ^_^. The ending is also very bizzare ... and now I listen to it, quite rough. But I would still like to hear feedback and things if thats ok.

http://www.myspace.com/raen1989

~ Fall ~

I hear you, I?m open
The door is far from closed
It?s piercing, I?m breaking
Apologies wont do it, I know
(I feel I?m not strong enough)
I feel like I couldn?t heal again
You say, ?It?s only a matter of time.?
Because of you I don?t feel alone
I know I couldn?t live if I let you go

My angel, my saviour
It?s you who saves me when I fall
When night comes, will you leave?
I?m too scared to close my eyes
I fear a nightmare that?s haunting me
I know it?s only a matter of time
Because of you it won?t get to me
Its while I?m sleeping that it can see

When?s it gonna stop?
I?m afraid of myself,
Of what I could do without you
I?ll keep tumbling down when there?s no one around
I wanna be with you

I?m screaming, you?re right here
You hold me together strong and steady
Your velvet voice soothes me
Far better than anyone?s

Why, in just one breath,
Can you do this to me?
I?m fed up of falling constantly
So there?s no giving up as I?m standing with love
You?re still here with me baby (yea)

And I live
And I breathe
My heart beats again
And I sing
I believe
You won?t leave again
And I feel
And I love
My heart beats again
And I sing again

When?s it gonna stop?
I?m afraid of myself,
Of what I could do without you
I?ll keep tumbling down when there?s no one around
I wanna be with you

Why, in just one breath,
Can you do this to me?
I?m fed up of falling constantly
So there?s no giving up as I?m standing with love
You?re still here with me

hehe there's no way im postin my stuff..... to embarrassin XDDDDD... but i might post some of cal's

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haha of course u can.. lol but i wanna play the guitar for this one^^ Cal can still play too but i wanna be lead .. well after i practice some more

... u should post some of ur guys previous stuff KAT

aaahhh!!! i am sooooo glad u posted that kiyn! me, cal, and dev got the band bac together a few weeks ago and i was supposed to ask u if we could use that song...

gah i totally forgot!!!

bad kitty! bad bad kitty!! lol

i wasnt gonna post this cuz personally i dont think its that great but everyone at school gave me eternal praise over it but oh well... hope u guys like it

~*I Still Breathe*~

closing my eyes, i try to sleep,
but your cold words still linger over me.
its the middle of the night
and i lay still, hardly moving.
there should be bloodstains on these sheets,
but oh mommy-dearest dont you worry.
im still breathing...

*oh, i cant take this anymore.
holding back the tears,
im so sick of all this cryin.
so weary from all the fighting,
i fall to my knees,
yet even if no one cares
i still breathe.

why is it that nothing i do can ever please you?
just tell me, tell me...
why am i such a disgrace?
i keep tryin to tell you
if you'd just get out of my way,
id get out of your face (yeah)
but oh, daddy-dearest dont you worry
you can always leave

repeat *

im still holding on
here in a place i dont belong
wanting to scream
but it keeps getting harder to breathe

oh, i cant take this anymore
holding back the tears
im so sick of all this cryin
so weary from all the fighting
i fall to my knees
but even though you dont care
i still breathe

ok got the next one done but i think it can use some more text to finish it completly as i want it
ok next song is called

''utada hikaru my feelings for you''


there are so many things i wanna say.
it is so important but i dont wanna give it away.
i am curious about this feeling for you
i am thinking about it i dont know what to do

i never felt this way before
it makes me mad and sore
i wanna be with you although it is not possible
i readed every magazine and every article

your beauty surpasses all other for so long
but the way you are now it is gone
now i hope that that time will come again
that you are on your best, i know you can!

i cant share this feeling with anyone.i know for sure
but if my love ever comes out, you must know, it is pure..
i never had a girlfriend let alone you
i cant say anything else but that i love utada hikaru

your smile, your look and your facial expresions
it was so beautifull exept some exeptions
you are singing so beautifull and yet so sweet.
if you have an concert i want to be at the first seat.

your voice is indescribable i dont know what to say
when i first heard it i was melting away.
the sound of your voice is keeping me in trance
every song i hear of you i wanna dance

i dont know how long your next album will take
but i guess also you will need a break.
i dont wanna rush things now, i know how you feel
make the song with your heart, i know the songs will be a strong as steel

oh hikaru were are you now i wonder.
if i dont release this feeling i wil be thorn asunder.
i know now i can never reach you so it seems
even when i try hard it isnt possibe, even in my wildest dreams

i know you will sing more for your fans i know you will.
the english album is comming now but still.
i hope you are singing for many many years
if you would quit soon it would make many tears

i am selfish now i know, i cant make you
but please do your thing only you want to do
if you would stop i dont mind i will suport you with all my heart
i dont want to leave at your side even when you and i are apart...

now i want to make an end of the story of mine
i want to be an writer so also i can shine
maybe.. just maybe i will write poems or songs
i know this feeling i have, i know where it belongs..

wew ok got it now^^ hope you guys like it^^
next time i...wait i know! if there are people who like my work maybe they can post some requests here and i will see what i can do! yeah i hope that will work^^.V

cool weezy rappin around are ya?
glad somebody else is posting lyrics here^^.V

and yeah i gotta eat... even though i ate
it aint my birthday but i got my name on the cake <<< confusing
try to make some more i like your work
soon i will post a new lyric myself trying to make the best ever