At first, Weezy, your poem is very simple - and entertaining. I found myself fascinated and pulled in by your message mid-way. I must admit that I was let-down by the ending. (I was expecting something profound)

But thank you - it was very thought provoking. I'm sorry for taking so long to reply. If you were to show me more, I would appreciate the read.

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This was the turning point for me, you absolutely had me from thenceforth.