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Re: Poetry anyone??
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i just wrote this poem...another series of haiku...or something...inspired by the solange song i posted a while ago (which explains the non-haiku form reference at the end of the piece)...geez, i got no work done tonight...

NASAKE

here, my weary heart,
blanketed by tired dreams,
barely safe from cold,

cries: darling, to be
in the halo of your arms
would be perfect bliss,

your warm embrace would
melt the ice of wintry fate,
causing joyous spring.

Won't you move closer than close
can bring you to me
Let your skin be the only warmth I feel
Can we lay in this space until forever?
Till the moments around us all are still
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Posted on: 2008/11/15 23:08
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